2 Goals for my second multi-draft

Two goals that I have for my second multi draft assignment are to get a better grade, and to improve my own writing skills. I did pretty good on the last one, which gives me a good feel on how I should write the upcoming assignment. Ways I can improve my writing and my grades are to use less un-cited rhetoric, explain key points more thoroughly, and use less passive voice. If I can change these vital things than i'm sure that my skills and grades will benefit, further setting me up for better writing in the future.